Ketubah Text...

Cayne and I drafted the following text for our Ketubah (Jewish Marriage Contract) today, and I'm posting it here, asking for feedback from any and all of you, Jewish or not, married or not. Please take a look and provide opinions...I'm leaving comments unscreened, so if you prefer not to have your comments visible, let me know and either I'll screen it, or send an e-mail to me.

Thanks for your help.

( First Draft of Ketubah Text )

PS...Cayne declared that this post required the "Wedding Hell" icon that cyan_blue made me.